Showing posts with label Works. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Works. Show all posts

Saturday, October 18, 2008

Networking-A play by Ray Macon

This site will be running in a few days. I apologize but I'm now writing off of three different PCs. The one containing 30 pages of Networking-the Play isn't' as yet playing along with others.

For a preview of this ridiculously real story about Professionals who network, go to
http://www.networkingplay.blogspot.com

Monday, October 13, 2008

Working on Stuff for Editor

This week I have a personal deadline to get some stuff over to my Editor Phillip King.

To read a preview of my story, Manley, with Horns! go to this blog: http://www.raymacon.blogspot.com

Friday, January 26, 2007

Creating an Outline

Sometimes the best way to finish a story is to think through the entire story in one-line sentences. Then, allow each sentence to represent a chapter. If you already know where you are going with the story, simply by knowing what is expected from each small segment can lead your book to finality.

This is a half list of chapters for my RAISE outline. Part of the book takes place in the Present, the other in 1950s. Some of the flashbacks have not been completed by my Co-author.

It's a great example of how to start a story, nonetheless:


Raise My Town My Love

Chapter 1 The Accident

Chapter 2 The Diner

Chapter 3 The Old Man

Chapter 4 David Unwinds

Chapter 5 Chopping Cotton

Chapter 6 Home Life with the Leathers

Chapter 7 David Awakes---Crystal Comes Home

Chapter 8 More Rest and Art Supplies

Chapter 9 Our Big Town

Chapter 10 Tension: Will It Rain Before Harvest?

Chapter 11 Cotton Trailer Line Wait

Chapter 12 Weigh-In of Trailers and Bales are Formed

Chapter 13 Friend Killed Stompin’ Cotton

Chapter 14 Funeral for a Friend

Chapter 15 Hunt Day

Chapter 16 The Hunt

Chapter 17 Christmas at the Leathers

Chapter 18 Modern Day: Hunt Day Goodbyes

Chapter 19 Crystal at the Diner

Chapter 20 David at Home with Trumpet

Chapter 21 Flashback

Chapter 22 Flashback

Chapter 23 Flashback

Chapter 24 David showers and goes for coffee and to see Crystal.

Chapter 25 The Marketing Expert Stranger

Chapter 26 Conversation with a Stranger

Chapter 27 Tour of Town with the Stranger

Chapter 28 Flashback: The death of Stan Leathers

Chapter 29 Flashback: L.E. our new dad?

Chapter 30 Flashback: Life on the farm

Chapter 31 Day Off---Trip to City

Chapter 32 Meet Marketing Expert for Dinner

Chapter 33 Flashback: Children Begin to Leave

Chapter 34 Flashback: Child #2 Leaves

Chapter 35 Flashback: Children 3 & 4 leave…well kind of leave.

Chapter 36 David dreams of a “last wagon train to Hollis.”

Chapter 37 A Walk in the Park with Crystal

Chapter 38 Tour of Dallas with the Marketing Director

Chapter 39 Dull day back at work in Hollis

Chapter 40 Mexican Birthday Party

Chapter 41 Flashback: The Leathers family takes in 5 strangers

Chapter 42 Flashback: Brothers go hunting together with strangers

Chapter 43 Flashback: Oldest Brother Trey becomes a policeman

Chapter 44 Flashback: Davey becomes a policeman


Chapter 45 Flashback: Hard Times Ahead: Pills...and kids to boot.

Chapter 46 Policeman Dave and the Weird Smell by the Bridge

Chapter 47 David in the Library researching American Roadside Attractions

Chapter 48 David meets friend, Douglas, who helps investigate smell.

Chapter 49 David finds the body of a Latina

Chapter 50 Consoles Crystal. Several days of his following her home.

Chapter 51 Flashback:

Chapter 52 Flashback:

Chapter 53 Flashback:

Chapter 54 Clue: "This ole town, people going down."

Chapter 55 David and OBI meet to discuss case.

Chapter 56 David & Deputies beef-up control of town

Chapter 57 Fashion Shoot in Hollis

Chapter 58 Conversations in the Diner

Chapter 59 Missing Model

Chapter 60 Flashback:

Chapter 61 Flashback:

Chapter 62 Flashback:

Chapter 63 Missing Model found dead

Chapter 64 David is questioned by his old boss, the Sheriff

Chapter 65 David is questioned by the press

Chapter 66 David meets a reporter

Chapter 67 David plays trumpet after reading his "bad press", finds clue.

Chapter 68 OBI reveals a connection and warns of a loose "madman".

Chapter 69 David on patrol

Chapter 70 Flashback:

Chapter 71 Flashback:

Chapter 72 Flashback:

Chapter 73 David follows a stranger

Chapter 74 Killer traps Crystal

Chapter 75 David confronts and kills murderer

Chapter 76 David is cleared, consoles Crystal

Chapter 77 David & Crystal spend time together, magazine spread arrives

Chapter 78 Movie company calls for shoot

Chapter 79 Leathers children return to Hollis

Chapter 80 Leathers new:

Chapter 81 Leathers new:

Chapter 82 David asks Crystal's father for her hand in marriage

Chapter 83 David on patrol, reads positive article about town

Chapter 84 Movie studio comes to town, changing city scape and rundown look.

Chapter 85 Crystal & David become engaged

Chapter 86 David becomes Catholic

Chapter 87 David & Crystal speak of moving

Chapter 88 Wedding Town

Chapter 89 Reality & the town today

Wednesday, January 24, 2007

Hearts Aflame Away from the Firehouse

My friend Yvonne's birthday this last August was so big it required renting a cabin by the lake.

Her husband, a fireman, was all for it. They had purchased a boat and planned to take guests around the lake "tubing".

For the weekend Dave invited all of his buddies & their wives. Yvonne invited her family and friends. Yes the Midtown guys came up from the big city.We had a really fun party.

And I had something up my sleeve.

A couple weeks before I asked Yvonne to tell me how she and Dave met. I thought if I could write something with more truth to it than lies I might also get them to teach their friends a little more about them. It's really a wonderful story, and I'm glad I got it on paper---as crazy as it reads.

As a special treat, I wrote a play for all of us to "roast" the happy couple.

This was a big surprise for Yvonne and Dave! We passed-out dolls and made them act as themselves in front of the crowd of friends.

One of the other surprises was that we gave her a "Fireman Billy" doll which, well...you'll have to look that one up on the Internet.

Keep in mind we wanted their friends to participate by having a couple lines. We also had several people for parts and an overabundance of super hero action figures in addition to the Barbies, Kens and Billy's.
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Hearts Aflame
Love away from the Fire House

By Ray Macon

Cast: 2 women, 7 men. (4 major roles of 2 males & 2 females).

NARRATOR
Some of you know Dave.
And some of you know Yvonne.
But do you know the story of how Dave and Yvonne met?
Well, once upon a time there was this beautiful young Georgia Girl who came to Michigan to get an apartment. She met a Leasing Agent and found some places she really liked…and could afford!

YVONNE
Wow, what a lovely apartment. Is this real balsa wood? I love the Formica counter tops.

LEASING AGENT
Why yes, (((whispered loudly)))circa 1980.

(((SPIDERMAN wanders on to stage)))

SPIDERMAN
Excuse me; is this the set of Spiderman 3?

LEASING AGENT
No. The set for “Spiderman 3-The Garden of Good and Evil- Devil Went down to Georgia” is across the lake.

SPIDERMAN
What’s this, then?

LEASING AGENT
A play called “Hearts Aflame---Love Away from the Fire House”.

YVONNE
Oh, it’s a story about me, Me, ME!


LEASING AGENT
Will you please excuse us; I’m trying to rent an apartment here.

(((SPIDERMAN leaves stage)))

LEASING AGENT
Now, the carpet in this apartment is just 5 years old.

NARRATOR
To make a long story short, Miss Yvonne takes a tour of other apartments, and sees Dave Dwyer, the Michigan Maintenance Man.

DAVE
Why hello there. I’m Dave the Michigan Maintenance Man, and I’m bending over fixing somethin’ so you can see my tight butt.

YVONNE
Well it’s working. I’m Yvonne. I’m from Georgia.

DAVE
That makes you a peach.

YVONNE
No one has ever seen a peach in Georgia. I’ve moved to Michigan so I can get my own apartment.

DAVE
Well, if you take this apartment Miss Yvonne, you’ll never have to worry about things being broken.

(((SILVER SURFER wanders on to stage)))

SILVER SURFER
I’m here to help Spidey rid the world of those ruthless aliens!

(((S.S. makes a move towards Dave, who punches him in the face)))

DAVE
I’ll kick yer ass!

YVONNE
No, he thinks…would everyone in the audience help me? Every time a super hero, uh---other than you Dave---comes out here please help me tell them “The set for Spiderman 3 is across the lake.”
On three…1-2-3

YVONNE, CAST & AUDIENCE
“The Set for Spiderman 3 is across the lake.”

SILVER SURFER
Sorry about that.

(((Silver Surfer wanders off stage)))

DAVE
Now as I was saying…Miss Yvonne, if you take this apartment I’ll keep an eye on you.

YVONNE
Thanks Dave…I have so much to think about.

NARRATOR
Meanwhile, Yvonne goes back to her old place to decide.

YVONNE
Decisions, decisions…I’m so tired. I’m getting sleepy.

NARRATOR
Cut to: Dream Sequence! Dave the Michigan Maintenance Man is bent-over, fixin somethin’.

DAVE
(((talking very, very slowly)))
Hi Miss Yvonne. Want to come over here and squeeze my arm muscles? They’re called biceps and triceps.

YVONNE
(((talking normally))))
Why are you talking so funny? And---and---being so fresh?

DAVE
(((taking very, very slowly)))
Because this is the Dream Sequence and you’re my Little Peach!

YVONNE
(((waking-up from sleep)))
Oh, my gosh. I must have been dreaming. I was dreaming about that apartment. The 26th one I looked at. Oh, I just can’t get that Maintenance Man out of my head!

NARRATOR
Yvonne tells her friend Kim the whole story.

KIM
…he’s probably a HO.

YVONNE
Men can’t be HOs.

KIM
Girl, men are HOs. Shall I remind you of all the men who tried to date you and you said no?
There was the Army, the Navy, the Marines…

(((Enter TWO EXTRAS for Spiderman 3)))

EXTRAS
Is this the set for Spiderman 3?

YVONNE
(((to audience)))
On three 1-2-3
The set for Spiderman 3 is across the lake!

EXTRAS
Sorry

(((EXTRAS exit stage)))



KIM
As I was saying, everyone wants to date you…the surfers from Lake Michigan, even the gay guys.

YVONNE
Yes, I’ve always been attracted to happy people. But I have never given my heart away. At least---not yet!

KIM
Oh, he will come along.

YVONNE
But---this Michigan Maintenance Man, he’s such a Hottie.

KIM
Girl, let’s go get the apartment so you will shut up.

NARRATOR
Meanwhile, Michigan Maintenance Man Dave tries to find out more information about Miss Yvonne.

LEASING AGENT
Hi Dave.

DAVE
Hi Leasing Agent.

LEASING AGENT
What are you reading?

DAVE
The VISITING FIREMAN. It’s an annual publication of Fire Service Enthusiasts from across the world who all share a common interest in the Fire Service.

LEASING AGENT
(((yawning)))
Uh huh.

DAVE
I’m studying to be a Fireman.

LEASING AGENT
Oh, I see.

DAVE
Look, I can’t stop thinking about Miss Yvonne. If that Georgia Girl comes back, would you at least come and get me? Is she going to take the apartment?

LEASING AGENT
I don’t know. She’s coming by this afternoon. This gives me an idea. I can’t wait to rent that dump---I mean---that apartment. Will you swing by the office? You might just be the key in renting the place!

NARRATOR
So that afternoon, Miss Yvonne comes back to sign the lease. She brings along her friend Kim.

YVONNE
Hello Leasing Agent. This is my friend Kim.

LEASING AGENT
Welcome. I’m sure you remember Dave, the Maintenance Man.

DAVE
Hi Kim. Hello there Miss Yvonne.

YVONNE
You’re talking normal.

DAVE
Hmmm?

YVONNE
Nothing. I have the punch list for the apartment. The only thing wrong is the holder for the toilet tissue roll.


LEASING AGENT
Oh yes?

YVONNE
Yes.

KIM
(((yelling/angry)))
I told her not to take the apartment if the toilet tissue roll holder is not fixed immediately!

DAVE
Oh, I can come up right now and fix it. Anything for you Miss Yvonne.

(((EVIL DOER enters stage)))

EVIL DOER
I’m here from Omicron 3 to rid the Universe of Spiderman and Do Gooders everywhere!

EVERYONE
The set for Spiderman 3 is across the lake!

NARRATOR
And that is the true story of how Miss Yvonne met Maintenance Man Dave. They moved back to Georgia, the Land without Peaches and you know the rest. Yvonne got her own superhero---Dave became a fireman. They got married and Yvonne at least got a job on Peachtree Street.

YVONNE
I just love my Fireman Dave.

DAVE
I love you too Miss Yvonne. Happy Birthday.

NARRATOR
The end!


Monday, January 1, 2007

Update on Works

Available Stories for Publication


The Garden Party Co-Authored with Leland Graham (coming July 2007) Seven people come together with money and time to throw a grand summertime birthday party. Little do these men know that the party will be the pivotal days from which they will set the course for the rest of their lives? And soon after the event, the hosts are forced to confront serious life issues, such as crime, divorce, coming out to old friends, AIDS, and the group's pact to stay together and keep each other laughing. Based on a true story.

Raise My Town My Love Co-Authored with Ron Leathers (coming May ‘07) A current story of an honest man the ghosts he is following into old age. Throw in a town which needs a truckload of siding and paint and a marketing genius, and flashbacks to the grand days of the town’s popularity and we see why the lead character gives a damn. Based on a true story.

Ghosts of Baby Lake (coming September 2007) This story about a town in Alabama in the late 1950s reminds us that “…change doesn’t bode well with some folk”.

Children of Baby Lake (coming November 2007) From a horrible event caused by zealot southern deacons to the murder and strange demise of cousins, the tales from Baby Lake continue. Yes, some of the same characters from the original are around, and the legacy of their blood kin continue to reveal much about the folklore in southern idealism.

Extravagance, the Musical! (Currently in Edit) An island in 1990 is the setting for this, the unofficial “Cancer Musical of Hope”. Aging celebrities Margot and David Fontaine think they have it all until Margot “begins to ignore” her breast cancer and their son runs away to the Persian Gulf War. Did I mention that their careers take a nose dive? There’s a surprise at the end which will leave one asking “why do I always doubt myself?”

Songs written for this work:


Let’s Go Play Tennis
Road Dog
Twenty-fifth Anniversary Song
Her Face
Workin’ For the Government
It Was Our First Christmas (Being Together)
Oscar’s been good to David
Something’s Wrong With The (Her) System
Zodiac Commercial, 1990
Extravagance
Coming Home in Dress Blue Blues (Requiem)
When I Miss My Hair
She’s got the Fire to Make It
Reprise “First Act Songs”
This is what it Means to be Alive

The Story of Andrew Pepper (completed) A boy becomes a man on the streets, losing his arm in the process. With this disability comes the agonizing process of learning to write with a different hand. One day he is given a paint brush, which becomes his phoenix.

A Coign of Vantage (completed) A man loves a woman deeply, even through her final days. Long hours are spent watching her and attempting to get a glance at some secret of her inner strength. Title and story based on my love for a painting by Sir Alma Tadema.




A Coign of Vantage (1895) It’s hard to tell from this angle, but the women await the arrival of their husbands and lovers on war ships, which are slowly making their way into the harbor.


The Pact of Surrender (completed) A suicide makes 3 men and their wives to question friendships and the annual rituals which have kept their club together. A dark past is uncovered, and sores are opened. What length would you go to keep a secret?

Fever (1986, completed) From a baby's fever to an angry man holding a town hostage we see how the southern heat can influence a person.

The Housewife & the Tree (completed) A fat woman devotes her life to watching a soap opera until she moves her television. It’s then we find she’s not the only fan of wasting time. This tree hugger of a children’s story is sure to motivate and start to participate!

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